Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved
the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Food is one of the essentials of life which provides us the energy we need to do work. The food can be taken in forms like fruits, grains, cereals and so on. The food we take should provide us required nutrients to keep our body fit. the easier food making process according to me has enhanced the way people live now than were earlier.
the important thing that the new ways do to improve life to day is by saving the time, in my school days i remember my mom preparing food for hours by washing carefully then cutting them to small pieces so that they cook well then moving to cooking area to cook but now the cut vegetables are available in market now, i use these when i prepare meal for me when i have to hurry up for the college so that cutting time is saved
On other hand we can also look into the nutrient values the products provide before we purchase and have balanced diet and also improve our levels of a particular we are defecient in or require more, my brother works as a software engineer he has needs more of vitamin A to keep his eyes healthy to look at computer for longer time so picks out the products which have more proportion of vitamin A.
In a nutshell, the newer ways save time and also good health so new preparation ways improve way of life
Sentence: On other hand we can also look into the nutrient values the products provide before we purchase and have balanced diet and also improve our levels of a particular we are defecient in or require more, my brother works as a software engineer he has needs more of vitamin A to keep his eyes healthy to look at computer for longer time so picks out the products which have more proportion of vitamin A.
Error: defecient Suggestion: deficient
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