Human being is taking so much attempts on earth from its beginning to make it livable. As a result, the earch is changing day by day. Someone demands that this change is damaging the earth while others argue differntly. In my point of view, human activity is making the earth a better place to live. There are several strong reasons on behalf of this opinion.
Firstly, the continuous endeavour by human make today's earth a beautiful place to dwell. The earliest life, ancient era of human history, was not so easy to survive. Human fought against wild anminals, natural disaster. They understood the key concept of survival. So, they tried their best to protect them from those predators, calamity. They invented home and left the 'cave life'. In this way, they are making the earth a livable place.
Secondly, the revolutoin of industrialization uplifted their daily life. Invention of fire, wheel, iron, electricity make this planet so viable to live. Human activity is also taking care of endangerd place, animals on earth. Scientists are now able to count the exact number of extincted animals and can take measure to prevent them being vanished from this planet. Researchers found unknown place using satellite, Google map and they utilized those place to maintain the ecological balance of the earth. Furthermore, they are researching on green house effect and monitoring the sea level. Their continuous efforts are making this world a better place to live.
Eventually, human being know that this is the only place to live. So, they love this earth. They are taking so much awareness program to make this earth a better place.
In conclusion, I think human activities are not damaging the earth. Their researches and activities are making this earth more beautiful and livable day by day.
Sentence: Invention of fire, wheel, iron, electricity make this planet so viable to live.
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Sentence: Researchers found unknown place using satellite, Google map and they utilized those place to maintain the ecological balance of the earth.
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Eventually, human being know that this is the only place to live.
Eventually, human beings know that this is the only place to live.
Sentence: As a result, the earch is changing day by day.
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Sentence: Someone demands that this change is damaging the earth while others argue differntly.
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Sentence: Human fought against wild anminals, natural disaster.
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Sentence: Secondly, the revolutoin of industrialization uplifted their daily life.
Error: revolutoin Suggestion: revolution
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