You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.Write a short

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The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Write at least 150 word

The bar chart shows forecasted sales of jeans in number of thousands by month for upcoming year in Turkey for two companies- mange Co. and Jack & Jones Co.

Mango Co. will have a steady growth up to 500000 in sale till August starting from 150000 pairs in January, though there will be a slightly decrease from January to February. The three consecutive months after August will sell the same amounts in August. On the other hand, December will have a rapid increment in sale which is 100000 pairs more than its previous month.

In case of Jack & Jones Co., the trend is similar to Mango Co. from February to June but outnumbered than Mango Co. Its January sell will start with 450000 pairs and will fall more than double in February. The sell will increase steadily after that and remain same for July and August i.e. 400000 pairs and, September and October i.e. 500000 pairs; then it will go to the peak 900000 pairs in the last month of the year.

The pie chart shows the tentative market share for those companies- mango Co. will have 20%, Jack & Jones Co. will possess 30% and rest of the 50% share will be for 'others' company.

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Sentence: The sell will increase steadily after that and remain same for July and August i.e. 400000 pairs and, September and October i.e. 500000 pairs; then it will go to the peak 900000 pairs in the last month of the year.
Description: The word sell is not usually used as a noun, singular, common

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