Some people think that scientists make the most important contributions to society. Other people think that the contributions of artists are the most important. Which position do you agree with? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although artists do contribute in reflecting civilization, history and significant social aspects of a society. However, the contributions of scientists to society remains superior in many aspects. The basis of my view are based on several reasons.
First of all, scientists had and are still having a great effect on health. Since long time ago they tackled to discover the causes of so many diseases, and looked for solutions, therapies and treatments. Over the time, it was because of them, humanbeings were able to overcome so many threatening diseases. For example; today and due to the scien...
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Sentence: We can never ignore the fact that this technology has affected the society on a large extent from both an ecnomical as well as a social aspect.
Error: ecnomical Suggestion: economical
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