Summarize the points made in the lecture being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage

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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific points made in the reading passage.

oth the reading and listening discuss whether crewless ships are advantageous or not. The former states that these ships are fruitful for three reasons, but the latter rejects each of these three points.

First of all, the passage claims that crewless ships are advantageous because they reduce the cost of labours and there are no need for any cost that involve with foods, air conditions, leaving spaces for the workers. On the other hand, the lecture argues that these workers are essential because they take care of the ship during its sailing time and they do necessary maintenance during this time. Moreove, in a crewless ship it not possible to do any maintenace before arraiving to the destination and this can cost a lot of money.

Second of all, the article asserts that crewless ships are less targeted by the pirates because they can not take any hostages. However, the lecturer rejects this statement by saying that high tech pirates can easily get control of these ships by hacking and in this process they can take the ship any place they want. In addition, they can also use as much time they want to get the valuable items in this process.

Finally, the writer argues that crewless ships are less likely to have accident because it is controlled by computer and sensors as most of the ships that fall into accident are due to lack of human reactions. In contrast, the speaker rebuts that most of the ships fall into accidents because it take long time to change its course. Furthermore, the computer in a crewless ships can only work in a predictable way but in case of a human operator they can take variety of dicisition and reacts with this accordingly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Oth
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...he ships fall into accidents because it take long time to change its course. Further...
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Line 7, column 374, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'ship'?
Suggestion: ship
...Furthermore, the computer in a crewless ships can only work in a predictable way but ...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a predictable way" with adverb for "predictable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...puter in a crewless ships can only work in a predictable way but in case of a human operator they ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, second, so, in addition, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 292.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76369863014 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38612629699 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496575342466 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 419.366225166 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0504969438 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 21.698381199 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06452816374 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0614583079515 0.272083759551 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300628480673 0.0996497079465 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0130797174537 0.0662205650399 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408734719921 0.162205337803 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00557413707643 0.0443174109184 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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