Tpo 22 integrated writing

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Tpo 22 integrated writing

The reading is proposed the attitude about uselessly of the athanol and impossibility of replacing that with gasoline, and privides three reasons for that. On the other hand, the lecturer is completely disagree with this idea and believes that athanol can be a good alternative for gasoline and consequently opposes arguments of the author.

First, the reading states that using athanol in cars will release carbon dioxide, just like gasoline and will cause to global warming. However the professor refutes this idea by stating that using ethanole will not cause to generation of carbon dioxcide. She mentions that,even though ir produces carbon dioxcide, considering that ethanol is made by corn and our knowledge about the mechanism of plants lives which attracts carbon dioxide and releases oxigen. Surprisingly demand to productopn more corn for ethanol will cause to attracting more carbon dioxide and releasing more oxigen which perevents global warming.

Second, the passage avers that, due to usage of corns for making athanol their will be less food for animals like caw. On the contrary the lecturer claims that, athanol is made from the parts of the plants which are not eating by animales. So that the production of ethanol will not lead to shortage of food for animales.

Ultimately, the article contents that, ethanol fuel never can compete with gasoline because production of that is very expensive. However the professor rejects this attitude by mentioning that, eventhough now the production expenses of ethanol is high but after increasing demand to using that which will lead to more production of ethanol , due to producting more amount the final price will drop. She states that with producting ethanol three times more than now, the price for each unit will drop by 40%. So that this fuel will be cheap and can compete with gasoline.

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the lecturer is completely disagree with this idea
the lecturer completely disagrees with this idea

Sentence: Second, the passage avers that, due to usage of corns for making athanol their will be less food for animals like caw.
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to athanol and their

Sentence: The reading is proposed the attitude about uselessly of the athanol and impossibility of replacing that with gasoline, and privides three reasons for that.
Error: privides Suggestion: provides

Sentence: However the professor refutes this idea by stating that using ethanole will not cause to generation of carbon dioxcide.
Error: dioxcide Suggestion: dioxide

Sentence: She mentions that,even though ir produces carbon dioxcide, considering that ethanol is made by corn and our knowledge about the mechanism of plants lives which attracts carbon dioxide and releases oxigen.
Error: oxigen Suggestion: oxygen
Error: ir Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dioxcide Suggestion: dioxide

Sentence: Surprisingly demand to productopn more corn for ethanol will cause to attracting more carbon dioxide and releasing more oxigen which perevents global warming.
Error: oxigen Suggestion: oxygen
Error: productopn Suggestion: production
Error: perevents Suggestion: prevents

Sentence: On the contrary the lecturer claims that, athanol is made from the parts of the plants which are not eating by animales.
Error: animales Suggestion: animals

Sentence: So that the production of ethanol will not lead to shortage of food for animales.
Error: animales Suggestion: animals

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No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Words: 303 250

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Score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 303 250
No. of Characters: 1522 1200
No. of Different Words: 140 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.023 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.439 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.308 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.64 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.615 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.365 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.612 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4