What are some qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
Parents have important dues for training their children and it is wise that they have the enormous qualities, if they want to make success of their behavior with their children. The main factor as for the good characters of parents is their knowledge of how to behave with children. Parents should get enough information on every aspect related to children before making decision to have a child. Therefore, the most principal quality of good parents is being knowledgeable. Moreover, they should be tender toward children’s manners.
Parents should know how to treat with children. It is necessary for parents to be aware of the children, their needs, and all of their condition related to their ages and sense. They should even study about requires of children at the various ages and try to manner accurately. For example, children when they are at the age of 5 to 12 are so sensitive and emotional that parent has to use the slow accent dealing with them and try to explain everything calmly. In contrast, at the age of upper than 15, children should not consider a child anymore. They want that parent speak with them in different way of that was behaved with then in childhood. After this age, they usually want that parents pay more attention to their comments and be more serious on their words. If parent doesn’t know how to contact at various ages with children, it might hurt their feeling and make them emotional or violent in their future. No wonder, being knowledgeable is main character of the good parents.
Parents should be tender in different situation of their children. In fact, punishment, whether corporal punishment or verbal punishment, is not the best option to treat with children when they did not act based on thing that their parents want to. A great parent comes to sit in front of his child and listen to his reasons when the child is wrong. Shriek and loud voice cause children feel afraid and con not form their own personality which will raise tremendous characteristically defects in the children. All Children are persuaded with the friendly manner of their parents because in this case, they feel their parent really like and understand them. As the experiences of parents has also proved that parents don’t reach acceptable results if they manner violently and in too strict way with ascends. As a result, being tender and temperate in any condition of children is a mean quality of the good parent.
From my view point, parents have high responsibilities by training children in the community. Therefore, they should be punctual and careful about their behaviors with their children in the family and two important characters are being aware of all aspects of children and having the ability of tolerating children when they make a mistake.
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Sentence: They want that parent speak with them in different way of that was behaved with then in childhood.
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Sentence: As the experiences of parents has also proved that parents don't reach acceptable results if they manner violently and in too strict way with ascends.
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