2)Explain how birthdays are celebrated in your country?
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Hi, I have another problem. I
Hi, I have another problem. I feel so frustrated that I can't say a complete sentence. Or the sentences I used are so simple. How can I improve this issue? I just feel so bad about myself.
Well, your problem is not
Well, your problem is not about simple or complete sentences. You actually can develop more complex sentences than most other users can. Your jobs nowadays:
1. sentences should be correct. remove those grammatical issues like: singular/plural
2. reasons should be right on the point. Remember: High marks = fluency + good content + more content.
'good content' means 'right on the point'
'more content' means simplicity. no extra or unnecessary or duplicated words
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The second reason is not specific. Need to tell the details about how to celebrate birthdays. for example:
first, noodles will be prepared by parents
second, before eating the noodles, ....
third, after eating the noodles...
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Don't need a conclusion. When you have a conclusion, it means there are something wrong.