7) In your opinion, what are the characteristics of a good son or daughter in afamily?

21 in 30

according to the pattern:

reason + why reason + advantages of the reason

You have issues on 'advantages of the reason'.

in the reason one, 'we should show them the respect' is unnecessary and duplicated to the reason
in the reason two, from 38'-45', is unnecessary and duplicated to the reason too

advantages of the reason in reason one like: by using the experiences, we will always be on the right track.
advantages of the reason in reason two like: the respect will show us the love and make them happier .