Some high schools and elementary schools require their students to wear school uniforms. Other schools let their students wear whatever clothing they like. Which of these two policies do you agree and why? Include details and explanations in your explanat

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The introduction is too long. Try this pattern for Q1-Q2:

first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 5-10 seconds
First, reason 1 and the example: about 15 seconds
Second, reason 2 and the example: about 15 seconds
Third, reason 3 (optional)
Conclusion: one sentence.(optional. Only when you don't have something to talk about)

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