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Talk about a place you enjoyed going to or visiting when you were a child. Describe the place. Explain why you enjoyed it.
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any grammatical issue?
any grammatical issue?
what is the most important draw back that you see in my speaking transparently?
No grammatical issues in this
No grammatical issues in this one.
The main draw back is that you treat speaking like writing. It is too formal. You need to remove some adjectives and transition phrases which are not necessary for speakings. High marks in speaking = fluency + good and more content.
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When you said 'furthermore', it is confusing to follow 'second'
Don't need 'personally speaking'