When looking for a job, what do you consider more important: the joy you will feel while doing the job or the money you will earn? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

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The second reason is too short. Try this pattern:

first 1-2 sentences: introduction. my opinion: A or B. agree or disagree. about 5-10 seconds
First, reason 1 and the example: about 15 seconds
Second, reason 2 and the example: about 15 seconds
Third, reason 3 (optional)
Conclusion: one sentence.(optional)