The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and the same area today. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about how the front of the beach in Australia changed in 1950 and the present.
Overall, the beachfront had six areas in 1950 and is growing more modern now. Moreover, the significant changes are the beach and over there. However, it can be seen clearly if we look at the specific decline.
Look at the map in 1950 of the beachfront, it has six areas including beach, pavilion, lighthouse, car park, two pools and the road to the city. At the middle of the map, the beach on the middle is also the entrance but if they go 25m they can see the pool at the left and other at the right side. In the north side, it has pavilions and the surrounding area is the playground for people who have some equipment such as seesaws, slides, and swings. Finally, next to it is the road to the city on the left.
Looking at the beachfront at the present, they have some changes now and more areas ( 10 areas) including two car parks, pavilion, beach, two pools, lighthouse, two surf clubs, restaurants and the road to the city. It doesn’t change at the entrance to the beach and two sides are left and right, also two pools but 50m and 25m. Next to it is the surf club and the lighthouse located in the south at the bottom. The top of the map is a pavilion and the two sides on the left and right are two car parks, the road to the city on the west next to the first carpark. Finally, the surf club and restaurant below the road to the city on the west side, the restaurant is behind the surf club. So, it can be seen that the beachfront is more and more development and have a convenient location.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hey have some changes now and more areas 10 areas including two car parks, pavili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 307.0 196.424390244 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27035830619 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31879273628 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416938110749 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6823220109 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119610479182 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481412523055 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551662465218 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923931191007 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165675989514 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.49 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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