Friends are an important aspect of our daily activity life. While some people keep their friends forever; others like the idea of making new friends. In my opinion, it is crucial to make new friends because it keeps you healthy, learn new things.
To begin with, friends are life because they encourage you to be healthy. Although that there a lot of friends are bad company, or let you make bad decisions. Nowadays, there are a huge number of friends who encourage you to play sports, work out, and enjoy your time. For example, since I had depression, my doctor advised me to make new friends. Because I like to play soccer, I tried to join a group to play soccer. As a result, this makes me healthier socially and in term of the body.
I made some friends as well as I quit taking my depression's bill. This example demonstrates how valuable is making new friends.
Secondly, new friends help you learn new information and up to date. If you keep going with old friends, you will never ever built new information, but you will keep talk about a topic that every time you fight with. On the other hand, every time you meet a new friend you will learn something new. This lets you think out of the box and learn a lot of information. My brother's experience demonstrates that this is true. he has five friends that he usually keeps going with them. He really gets bored with them because they fight about soccers' teams. Recently, he met two people in the university and after only one week. I saw that he discuss different topics with my father one of which is about politics. If he had not met these two friends, he would have not confidently talked with my father about politics.
In conclusion, I feel strongly that making new friends boost your energy and treat you socially as well as let you learn new information and think out of the box.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...erience demonstrates that this is true. he has five friends that he usually keeps ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52083333333 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38288426089 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520833333333 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8249991335 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.0454545455 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260346260398 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831779934087 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600778096136 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165775450975 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280095310358 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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