The graph below shows population figure for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows population figure for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The line graph illustrates the total population of two different countries such as India and China from 2000 and with the estimation of 2050.The data calibrated in billions.
Have a look on the population of India and China, in 2000, the growth rate of former was exactly recorded 1,000 billions however, the later was 200 billions higher as compare to the India. With the passage of time till 2000 both India and China will keeps on 1,300 and just above 1,400 billions respectively.
By having a glance on the upcoming years, the population of India will recognise one thousand five hundred billions in 2040 whereas, another country will decrease with the difference of 400 billions. Moreover, before increasing both are stayed on 1,450 billions in 2030. In last year, China will decline with 60 billions while, India will touching the peak point about 1,500 billions.
Overall, the population of India was showed significant rise over the time period with the comparison of China.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, whereas, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0490797546 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51617523081 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5595222193 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.571428571 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25217696373 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123256743989 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744195415031 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17564102417 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495290393377 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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