The famous quote “Education is the passport to the future, for tomorrow belongs to those who prepare for it today” implies that it indeed takes life to the path of bright rather than dark. Education is very much precious ornament which embellishes life with copious wisdom. The author belief that, all college and university student would benefit from spending at least one semester studying in foreign country. As people question me,” Do you belief on the statement of author?” then, my answer will always be “yes”, of course. I really support the idea of exchange education whereby students of a university involve in foreign university for certain periods. There are too many evidences to prove supporting view point about author’s statement.
Firstly, in the context of my country Nepal, the theoretical education is somewhat appreciable, but is miserable the condition of practical ones. The most develop and powerful country is America in the technology throughout the world, has best education in aerospace theoretically and practically as well. So, the education about aerospace within Nepal is not just enough to do best and if, get chance to study at least sporadically in American university which would really help to gain more knowledge. Such insights pay off great result. This is how one gets benefited spending at least one semester.
Next, there are best football academies in England where one can train very well. In other side, my country has very worst performance in this field due to lack of good academy. So, when one go to football academy of England then he find himself performing with brilliant players. Such activity makes them learn a lot of skill, technique, strategies and obviously improve performance. World best coach train him to build spectacular tactic to perform in matches. Furthermore, they also get chance to play matches against world best team which also directly influence in improving performance. As result of all these opportunities, one obviously improves and performs best.so, in this way, this example demonstrate and also support my thought that students benefited spending at least one semester in foreign university
.
Finally, even though, it is very expensive to go for foreign study causes great problem for parents to manage huge expenses; it pays back precious values. It provides opportunities for cross cultures, traditions, and religions which help to represent your country in the world, indeed. We can grasp the methodologies of teaching and later can apply in our own country which improves the education system.
In fact, I conclude that all colleges and universities students would benefit from spending even one semester in foreign universities and this is best idea for the development of personal and global as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 444, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...n foreign country. As people question me,' Do you belief on the statement of auth...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: BELIEF_BELIEVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'believe' (verb) instead of belief (noun)?
Suggestion: believe
...ry. As people question me,' Do you belief on the statement of author?' then,...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'has the best'.
Suggestion: has the best
...in the technology throughout the world, has best education in aerospace theoretically an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...g at least one semester. Next, there are best football academies in England where one...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'worsted'.
Suggestion: worsted
...ell. In other side, my country has very worst performance in this field due to lack o...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...this field due to lack of good academy. So, when one go to football academy of England t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
... to football academy of England then he find himself performing with brilliant playe...
^^^^
Line 5, column 820, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...east one semester in foreign university . Finally, even though, it is very expen...
^^
Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...mester in foreign universities and this is best idea for the development of personal an...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, really, so, then, well, at least, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2390.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34675615213 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89483714757 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565995525727 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4489379324 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.636363636 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3181818182 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310846739408 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854835045376 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106596100586 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180224991395 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715931075831 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.