Being with the development of travel, difficult travelers who are ready to pay an amount of money to get desire trip. They often prefer to find a destination overseas and very special for them. To attract such customer a number of strange tours have opened where difficult place as desert and Ice land are the real challenges with them. However, there are advantages and drawbacks to such kind of tourist will be discussed.
The most important purposes for every tourism is to has a memorable experience and charge energy for the free life. Some people just choose a safe choice as going to a natural zoo, trekking around a national park where many others there at that time. But that is not enough. Nowadays, a trip to go Sahara or Antarctica gives that they never ever seen before. Learning skills how to survive and seek to water and protect themselves under high temperature as a hell in the daytime or keep them warm in the night time. Those are exactly what they want to take over their limitation. In addition, seeing a night sky is filled full by star without any noise will make everyone feel peaceful. In another hand, once the tourist can go to Antarctica, they can find a penguin, white bear or special fish. Furthermore, those destinations give a very natural scene that was never ever affected. it brings them an event that they can only one time in life. After all, the challenges make them strong and fresh to restart their work.
However, besides those advantages, the tourists face many dangerous problems during the trip. Normally, in order to pass that kind of places, each professional tourist or tourist guide has to train carefully and seriously. For example, Bear Grylls is a famous host show, He has taught survive skill to live in a difficult place without any support. Even that he still needs to check healthy and a good crew who give him advice. Hence, if the tourist is not familiar with a terrible condition, it is easy to lose and even though influence massively. Actually, in a recent notice, there a huge amount of people were lost in such places and it hard to find them in good health.
In short, although traveling broadens the minds, make us become stronger but in order to protect themselves, each tourist needs to consider carefully about where they want to go, how good their health is and how much experience they have to treat a harsh weather condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, after all, as to, for example, in addition, in short, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70071258907 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44687634826 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572446555819 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2039053224 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9545454545 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1363636364 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197569840852 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498771380725 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466914508881 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121844513107 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067498061678 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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