TPO-21 - Integrated Writing Task Genetic modification, a process used to change an organism’s genes and hence its characteristics, is now being used to improve trees through genetic modification. It is possible to create trees that produce more fruit, g

The reading suggests that planing genetically modified trees on a large scale promises to bring a number of benefits.however the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.

Firstly, the reading suggests that genetically modified trees are designed to be harder than nature trees, on the contrary the speaker underline the fact that in case of climate change some unmodified trees will survive while genetic modified trees will wiped out due to they are program to resist in specific climate.

Secondly,the passage states that modified trees promise to bring a number economic benefits to those who grow them, the professor casts doubt on this idea by stating that modified trees have hidden costs. Genetic modified seeds are more expensive than normal ones. Also according to law peasants are not allowed to plant seeds which they collect unless they pay charge to companies while if they use unmodified genetic seeds they can seeds every years for free.

Last but not least the reading asserts that the growing demand for firewood and building timber, many forests are being cut down faster than they can be replaced in contrast the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that modified trees can damage local trees because they plan between nature trees and by their excessive grow they deplete resources like water, sunlight, soil nutrients.

Votes
Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...evidence to refute them all. Firstly, the reading suggests that genetically mo...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'wipe'
Suggestion: wipe
...rvive while genetic modified trees will wiped out due to they are program to resist i...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... resist in specific climate. Secondly,the passage states that modified trees prom...
^^^^
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ds are more expensive than normal ones. Also according to law peasants are not allow...
^^^^
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'seed'
Suggestion: seed
...y use unmodified genetic seeds they can seeds every years for free. Last but not l...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause they plan between nature trees and by their excessive grow they deplete res...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 227.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17621145374 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35132545471 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603524229075 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 21.2450331126 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.048665971 49.2860985944 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 195.833333333 110.228320801 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8333333333 21.698381199 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.1666666667 7.06452816374 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.527246109505 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250413472341 0.0996497079465 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841314300965 0.0662205650399 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308515804366 0.162205337803 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626148783701 0.0443174109184 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.3589403974 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.8541721854 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.0289183223 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.7273730684 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.498013245 160% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.2008830022 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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