Write a letter to your friend who is working in multinational company. In your letter- Tell him/her that there is a job vacancy in their company.- Say how you found out about the job.- Ask for help with your job application.- Explain why you are intereste

Hi Jan,

Hope you are doing well, I'm writing this letter with regard to a job opening in the organization where you are working.

Last week, I got an email from a job searching website that there is an opening for Automobile test engineer at TATA Motors, Pune, and the process to apply job is online. I checked their official website and found that the company needs a reference name of any known employee, else they will not entertain any application. So, I need a favor from you, it would be a great advantage for me if I mention your name in the reference section. All I needed is your employee number and designation.

I am super interested in this job, as I have been long for a job with an original equipment manufacturer and TATA Motors is the Makka for automobile engineer. I hope you'll send me the required details as soon as possible.

Please call me any time if you have needed any extra information on the same.

Yours truly,
Satpreet Singh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Hi Jan, Hope you are doing well, Im writing this letter with regard to a jo...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...e Makka for automobile engineer. I hope youll send me the required details as soon as...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6091954023 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58536384727 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2687947147 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268256592031 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992041989971 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608985923942 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143363233454 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678218164769 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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