Nowadays is very difficult to make important decisions alone. We need to be supported by reliable people to make the right decision. Because of this, I agree with the statement I think we should never make an important decision alone.
First, we live in a world when sometimes we are not able to see all the possibilities that this decision can involve. Young people, sometimes have a lack view about how an adult life is and their parents can help them with it. When I was a student, in the last year of my high school I needed to make a decision about what was going to study at the university. This decision involved a lot of variables, for example, I really liked math, on the other hand, I hated history but my first option to choose a course was physiology, because I really liked to talk with others, to lesson their problems, he came to talk with me and told that because of i hated physiology I should change my course because there was a lot of this to study. He gave the option to change my mind and go to take engineering as a course because even though I will not talk with a lot of people, i will need to talk with some clients and heard their problems about their projects. In addition to this, I loved math. I accept his advice and today I am a happy engineer.
Second, some decisions can affect the others life, especially in a marriage. When a decision is taken alone about changes in family routines we need to take into consideration all necessities, from all of the family's member, not only our. I have a friend and he decided to move with your family to other country and restart a new life there. He has struggled about this situation because this is a tough decision. He decided to meet with me and her wife to talk about this. At this meeting, I told my point of view about this, the pros and the cons in addition to this his wife did the same. He thought about the points that we discussed and take a decision to not move and although he needed to live a new life, as we argued, he could do this in their own city.
In conclusion, is easier to take a good decision count with some parents or some close friends even though this decision disagrees about our personal opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ption to choose a course was physiology, because I really liked to talk with othe...
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...ith others, to lesson their problems, he came to talk with me and told that becau...
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Line 3, column 639, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
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Suggestion: because i
... he came to talk with me and told that because of i hated physiology I should change my cou...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...o talk with me and told that because of i hated physiology I should change my cou...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h I will not talk with a lot of people, i will need to talk with some clients and...
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Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... Second, some decisions can affect the others life, especially in a marriage. When a ...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...nto consideration all necessities, from all of the familys member, not only our. I have a ...
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Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...hough this decision disagrees about our personal opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, so, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34299516908 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40793029614 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463768115942 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0256490871 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161545517611 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663678967783 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924832537959 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149057938652 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119580698375 0.0645574589148 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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