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IELTS Writing Task 1 (The topic is attached below.)
The provided graphs give the percentage statistics by Greek survey about five reasons that can attract people in two age groups, 20-35 and 40-50 age groups, for selecting their occupation in 2003. Overall, concerning on money and parents was the two most important factors in both groups.
It is noticeable that the Greek people in 20-35 age group were influenced by money and parents as the two most vital reasons for choosing their career at just over and almost 25 per cent respectively. Similarly, figures of the people in older group were the same trends but the parents were the most...
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role models (about 25 per cent) were more influence
role models (about 25 per cent) have more influence
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.6 4.0
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