Eating habits of people have significantly changed over the past few years. Convenience food affects human’s health negatively as confirmed by healthcare professionals, yet the number of people who consume fast food is increasing. This essay will discuss the core reason of this trend and will suggest the remedial actions to tackle this issue.
Generally speaking, there are a number of reasons why people gravitate towards fast food. Perhaps the main reason why people are in favour of convenience food is because of the time limitations in fast paced life. Due to surge in day to day expenses, women who used to stay at home and do household chores - such as cooking food for the family - in the past are now working in offices to make both ends meet. As a result, they do not find ample time for cooking and often end up preparing easy to made processed food. Furthermore, cost of junk food is another decisive factor due to which many lower middle class families tend to purchase junk food so as to save money.
What can be done to stop people from eating junk food, then? The first step is to regulate women working hours and provide them some flexibility so that they would be able to allocate reasonable amount of time for household and cooking. Additionally, government has to step in and educate public by running nationwide ad campaigns that show people the obnoxious impact fast food has on their health. Another solution is to impose heavy taxation on fast food so that general public find it less affordable and develop a habit of healthy eating.
In conclusion, limitation of the free time is pushing people to tend towards fast food; however, with increased taxes, educating public and easing out women working hours this problem can be resolved in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85947712418 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54723259858 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7805959669 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365337351848 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142381893987 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908927728792 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22736936908 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312629116799 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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