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Some companies are closing their offices one day per week to save energy (gas, electricity). What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These days, energy resources such as gas and electricity are becoming more and more rarely, especially for industries. In most of countries, governments suggest to some big companies who have many factories that need much energy for their producing activities to reduce the level of using electric and gas energy. What are the positive and negative effects of this?
To begin with, several companies’ owners have many opinions with the suggestion from the governments. One of the owners said that the reduction of electricity usage in their company will affect the number of their products. To s...
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Sentence: In another cases, the employers' children are felt the impact also.
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Suggestion: Refer to another and cases
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No. of Different Words: 178 200
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No. of Words: 386 350
No. of Characters: 1888 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.432 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.891 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.605 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.083 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.928 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.417 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.266 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.461 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5