In this contemporary age of Democracy, a Leader is quintessential in each and every major part of the society. There are certain aspects that makes the leader in his particular domain great. One of such aspects is that the leader showing the propensity towards the likes and dislikes of the one he leads. Even though there are many cases in the history where this aspect of taking feed back has failed the leader because of treason or because of the followers getting brainwashed by some ill wishers, taking feedback is proved to be included in a better way to lead people.
A famous Sanskrit statement "Yatha Raja Tatha Praja" which says As the king, so are his subjects. Right from the ancient age the great rulers like Chandragupta Maurya, a boy from no where to a man who almost conquered whole India considered their follower's words. His 'Guru' Chanakya along with his committee of his initial followers gave their valuable teachings and feed backs on how to capture the clandestine lands and strategies to fight frivolously over the mire lands of India. But in cases like Rani Chennamma, another great Queen who ruled southern part of India in around 1850's incurred an act of treason by her follower when she got beguiled by her courts-men's words which ultimately lead to her death on the war field. There fore It can be rightfully said that it depends on the leader to what extent he/she considers the feedback of his/her subjects, but to completely discourage the feedback is an act of foolishness.
In the Democratic countries like India, people expect their leader to understand their wishes in depth. People when they cast their votes, they do it by analyzing the agenda of the candidate for what he/she does after getting the 'chair' to rule. Narendra Modi, who is known as the people's Prime Minister, is one of such leaders who read the minds of his people. Despite of all the false allegations of crimes and venality made over him, right from 2002 he traveled his state of Gujrath and asked for the feedback of the denizens. After each and every tenure of his rule, he did put forth his agenda based on what people expect in his next tenure. Because of his effective rule, the GDP of Gujrath subsequently increased. Thus a viable rule is decided by how a leader chooses to be the 'face of people' by taking their feedbacks.
In a nutshell, leadership encompasses vast amount of factors to be taken care of from the leader. Right from the ancient period, personalities like Changragupta Maurya or Chennamma till the contemperory Democratic period's leaders like Modi have etched their paths of leadership with few aspects that surmounted the aspect of taking feedback of people at the first place. Thus for the leader to be one of the best, he/ she must encourage the feedback from the people whom they lead.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the feedback is an act of foolishness. In the Democratic countries like India, ...
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... GDP of Gujrath subsequently increased. Thus a viable rule is decided by how a leade...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 489.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79959100204 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57737031226 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517382413088 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 724.5 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.6726233054 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.526315789 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7368421053 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.52631578947 5.21951772744 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290969059605 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943477250339 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110209585176 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187240514741 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101952684213 0.0667264976115 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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