The following bar chart illustrates the proportion of families purchasing and hiring houses located in England and Wales, which is ranging the period from 1918 to 2011.
Before 1971, the percentage of households in rented ones showed an declining tendency from its climax of approximately 77% to half of the whole people, whereas the others increased gradually from almost 24% to 50% ,coinciding the former group.
After 1971 ,the percentage of renting accommodation dropped continuously to nearly 32% in the following 30 years until it rebounded to 36% more or less in 2011, while the people inclined to buy houses stayed the growing trend till 2001,reaching peak point closing to 70%.Obviously, the number of this group jumped about 64%.
Besides, the number of the above two groups was equal in 1971 .
Overall, the percentage of people renting houses showed an decreasing tendency, though it recovered in 2011. By contrast,
those who opted for buying kept growing except the decline in 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, whereas, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27950310559 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77503293741 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.2977610783 43.030603864 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157078717057 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072564502 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462461318667 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071766560277 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444834461721 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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