Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree.
In recent day, the information is delivered in various form such as printed and electronic modes. Many people assume that printed-newspaper is the most effective method to get hold of up to date information and extremely influence compares to other types of media.
I strongly disagree that the newspaper is the best option to acquire the current information.
The advance of communication technology such as the invention of smart-phone has completely changed people behaviour, especially in term of getting the information. For instance, despite reading a printed-newsletter, people prefer to use a device to access electronic news such as Jakarta Post, The Guardian, and other news websites. Beside handy and convenient, this method is saving much time since people could search for intended-news in which they are looking for. Moreover, the amount of information provided by electronic media is abundance, therefore it could meet the people need. In addition, the information provided by electronic media is more up-to-date compares to printed-media form since the publisher need no extra time in term of printing and distributing process.
The printed-newspaper is seen as one of a contributor to environmental damage because of using paper as basic material. Furthermore, second-hand newspapers rarely use for other purposes and it becomes a pile of garbage that could lead to environmental pollution and ruining the scenery.
In conclusion, I consider that the newspaper is not the best way to get the newest information because there are other forms of media provided the fastest and the cheapest information.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, moreover, second, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50199203187 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34921640385 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9685550159 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150987588376 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564900549622 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494602399501 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0668601846605 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486615504713 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.