Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

traffic accidents remain as serious problems in many countries. people consider that the best method to solve this matter is by imposing harsh punishments for the traffic offenders, while others think that another approach such as increasing road security is the best method to tackle this issue. this essay will address both sides of view and providing opinion as a conclusion.

Punishing traffic offenders with harsh sanctions such as revocation of driving license is a method can be applied to deal with road accident issue as it can increase the driver’s awareness regarding the consequences resulted from violation of traffic policies. Singapore, for instance, issuing a regulation for the drivers involved in road accidents to hand over their driving licenses and prohibits them to drive any means of transportation for a certain period of time. this is proven effectively work to reduce the number of traffic collisions in this country.

However, other people share different opinions regarding this issue due to the fact that they believe another measurement such as improving road safety can be taken into account. providing psychological test for driving license applicants for example, can measure the mental state of the driver. this way the authorities can selectively approving the driving license based on the applicant’ psychological states. Therefore, there is no drivers with unstable mental condition operating their vehicles in the road and traffic accident can be avoided.

To sum up, although I reckon that strict punishment is one way to solve the road accidents issue, I personally consider that increasing road security such as psychological examination for the applicants of driving license in more effective since it could prevent people with unstable mental condition to drive in the road.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, such as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48943661972 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91755684926 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4897987114 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.727272727 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260549356177 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101396690603 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493262941668 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167093431032 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124271896104 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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