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In many countries schools have sever problems with student behaviour. What do you think? What solutions can you suggest?
Students are roses of educational garden. They are building blocks of a country. Their behaviour depicts the future of them but nowadays in many countries schools have several problems with student behaviour. There could be multifarious reasons behind this let us discuss it.
As there is no smoke without fire, there is no problem without cause. First and the foremost cause behind student behaviour faced in many countries schools is working parents. Parents have hectic schedule so they did not spend quality time with their children due to which children did not get moral values and which lead...
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thence children become emotionally deprive
thence children become emotionally deprived
no one have enough time to guide them correctly.
no one has enough time to guide them correctly.
every problem has its solution too
every problem has its solutions too
To be recapitulate,
To recapitulate,
teachers meetings should be organised for the betterment of student, parents and teachers too.
teachers meetings should be organized for the betterment of students, parents and teachers too.
give right shape to young generation
give right shape to young generations
Sentence: Their behaviour depicts the future of them but nowadays in many countries schools have several problems with student behaviour.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and schools
Sentence: First and the foremost cause behind student behaviour faced in many countries schools is working parents.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and schools
Sentence: Adding to it, parents -teachers meetings should be organised for the betterment of student, parents and teachers too.
Error: organised Suggestion: organized
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 346 350
No. of Characters: 1743 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.313 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.038 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.497 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 111 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.211 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.654 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.296 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.485 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5