tpo 45
The material discusses the existing of bees as early as 200 million years ago. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely there are no bees' fossils dated back to 200 million years. Next, 200 million years ago there were no flowering plants, and there is a close relationship between them and bees. Finally, the resemble bee nests lack special caps.
Conversely, the lecture challenges the points, one specific contradiction, no bees' fossils remain because they could not be preserved. bees are reserved by using the sticky liquid from resin trees, 200 million years ago these trees were rare and they started to be common latter. As a result, the absence of fossils does not mean that bees did not exist, but there were no trees that could produce the right kind of resin. In addition to that, early bees might feed on other plants, such as pine trees, then after flower plants were evolved, bees started to adapt to them. One final point, bees built chambers and use special waterproof materials with a distinctive chemical composition, when they examined the nest chambers, they found that they have the same chemicals used by modern bees.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ionship between them and bees. Finally, the resemble bee nests lack special caps. Converse...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Bees
...in because they could not be preserved. bees are reserved by using the sticky liquid...
^^^^
Line 5, column 793, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the same chemicals used by modern bees.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, look, regarding, then, while, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 30.3222958057 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 217.0 270.72406181 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03686635945 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38078092639 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.540411800872 114% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1454623892 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.3 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 21.698381199 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06452816374 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0748413282648 0.272083759551 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0331549341086 0.0996497079465 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0160540860363 0.0662205650399 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468563354126 0.162205337803 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257403171104 0.0443174109184 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
Read sample essays from ETS:
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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