tpo 9
The material discusses the concept of using the hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine instead of the internal-combustion engine. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading pasage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely the hydrogen needed for fuel-engine comes from water or natural gas, so it will be easily available. Next, using hydrogen-based fuel-cell engines will solve the pollution problem. Finally, this kind of engine will be cost-effective.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is hydrogen needed for fuel-cell engine is not directly used from water, but from very pure liquid state; moreover. this liquid is very difficult to be produced and storage. it could be produce under very low temperature, which needs high equipment. In addition to that, the hydrogen-based engine will not solve the pollution problem, because it needs pure hydrogen from water, and that needs lots of energy, which produces from burning coal and cause environment pollution. One final point, the hydrogen-based engine made of platinum, which is an expensive metal helps hydrogen to go under chemical reactions to produce electricity, so the engine will be expensive.
In summary there are discrepancies in the presented information.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oints outlined in the reading pasage. Firstly, the reading details specific po...
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...ind of engine will be cost-effective. Conversely, the listening challenges the...
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... from very pure liquid state; moreover. this liquid is very difficult to be produced...
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...y difficult to be produced and storage. it could be produce under very low tempera...
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...e final point, the hydrogen-based engine made of platinum, which is an expensive ...
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...of platinum, which is an expensive metal helps hydrogen to go under chemical reac...
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...ity, so the engine will be expensive. In summary there are discrepancies in t...
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... be expensive. In summary there are discrepancies in the presented informati...
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...repancies in the presented information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, while, in addition, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 22.412803532 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72195121951 5.08290768461 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14739630644 2.5805825403 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570731707317 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.8939834725 49.2860985944 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.636363636 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 53.8541721854 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.2367328918 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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