Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?
The school-age children are the future adolescents of our society, and treat them in good way is critical for progression in their future life.
Most of the people argue and have a negative notion about offering money for every high mark in school accomplishments of children, Although, other groups of people agree with this idea. personally, I agree with offering children to acclaim them for their high marks in their schools and I illustrate my two essential reason in below paragraphs.
First and foremost, offering money or gift to acclaim children for their school's achievements, allows them to be recognized as a successful person, and motives them to set durable target for themselves. For instance, I can remeber when I was an elementary school student, everytime I got high grade, my father gave me one dollar and acclaimed me to save it in order to buy my favorit bicycle. In addition, I set a goal to reach my bicycle and count every grade should I take to reach my goal. After a while, I became top student in my school and I exploited my time and energy to ace my exams to get more money and enjoying to reach my bicycle.
also, every offer to children for their success give them a sense of satisfaction of themselves. Additionally, satisfied students are not only more confident about their abilities but also more descipline about their duties and commitments. this is a virtuous cycle for children to overcome every challenges in their recent and future life. Furthermore, elevated self-esteem causes these children more reliable and hard-worker in school and personal life, and these circumstances ensuring their success.
All in all, offering money to students for their achivement in their school has privilages such as give them motivation to define target for themselves and they could find out about the sense of satisfaction, which guarantees their success in their future life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Personally
... groups of people agree with this idea. personally, I agree with offering children to accl...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and enjoying to reach my bicycle. also, every offer to children for their ...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...joying to reach my bicycle. also, every offer to children for their succ...
^^^^
Line 17, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ine about their duties and commitments. this is a virtuous cycle for children to ove...
^^^^
Line 17, column 505, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e circumstances ensuring their success. All in all, offering money to students f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 25, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ees their success in their future life.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11006289308 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8366679851 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531446540881 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1942607065 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.416666667 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356213345409 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143987203303 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739247938978 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215410225452 0.150856017488 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585776340115 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.