As we rely more and more on the technological invention to solve the problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
in this modern world, technological creation are utilized more and more for getting a comfortable life. people use automobiles to reach their job on time or to reach various destination within short time and commute their family of friends through the communication technology. as a result, human life has become more and more easier. it may seem that this invention will make us idle or degrade our thinking capability. i do not agree with this statement and presented various reason to prove it.
technological usage doesn't preclude our thinking capability.Since its use saves times and provides large free time to perform more creative work. invention of large technological devices have made our life effective. though this technological invention like automobile frees human to tackle new issues, they also generates some other problems in long term. example, large production of automobile creates the issue of more fuel consumption and hence, led people to think about the other alternative means of fuel. also, extensive fuel consumption led to the worldwide problem global warming. solution of such problems required unfettered thinking and imagination of the scientist, engineers and innovators. this proves that technological invention not only makes human life easier but also creates some issues which may be solved by human thinking power.
new technological invention provides huge access to vast information through the internet. this accessibility to new information automatically enhances our mind's horizons. this technology has not only made life comfortable, but also made access to information easier. One can sit comfortably in the house and view information for broad learning through internet facility. Nowadays student of any field use internet to learn and research more about the subject matter. this technological invention provides a platform for easier learning of the subject. the more we study from the internet, the more we thrive to learn more. therefore, our mind thinking capability enhances more.
some may argue that this invention has made us too comfortable that we stick in front of this invention like TV for large hours. such people lack to see that people watch TV programs to learn new information related to world. also many businessmen sit in front of the TV to view the information regarding the sales market. they are not sitting idly but analyzing the stock values. therefore, it can be seen that usage of technology to live comfortable life doesn't lessen their thrive to learn more and be more creative. people utilize the free time to search for more new ways to make more invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33412887828 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87910871251 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496420047733 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1866781219 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9615384615 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1153846154 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309620600651 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949452271939 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848120781109 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20660080678 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167808115664 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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