spending time alone vs with friends
Being in a network of friends vs. spending your time by yourself is one of the highly controversial issues among the ordinary people, human experts and above all psychologists. As far as I am concerned I am in a state of ambivalence all the more reason why depending on my mood I might lean towards to be with my contacts or on my own. I’d explore my conspicuous reasons as follows:
First and foremost, human being is a social creature and interactions are inseparable elements of our life. Friends complete us; they lend a hand to us in rainy days. Additionally, as Leo Tolstoy once scribbled “Happiness is meaningful when shared.” By this I mean, we share our smiles and tears, failures and triumphs with our intimate associates. When the rest of the world walks out, our friends walk in. As an illustrative example, I can’t imagine travelling to even paradise without my friends.
On the other hand, admittedly, there are some minutes in every body’s life that just being alone can be worthwhile .These are predominantly complex moments in our life. Accordingly, What you yearn for is to shut your door, crawl into your solitude, listen to a piece of soothing song, ponder over a few pages of your beloved book or simply close your eyes and walk along the B&W road of your life or even shed some tears. Friends? Not really, they have to wait for you to hatch your loneliness egg and come out, with a desire to be with them again.
To put it in a nutshell, I can’t confirm a magic and fixed formula here. Being a sociable person, my personal preference is to spend the considerable part of my time with my friends. Nonetheless, who can deny the importance of spending some hours alone on special occasions?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, if, nonetheless, really, so, while, i mean, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75328947368 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88604968914 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4109299249 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222653111821 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740785168191 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728728298691 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129451131528 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515915451254 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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