Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As limited budget as the government has, basic infrastructural development should be carefully arranged. Among these development, internet access and public transportation are something we cannot ignore. Modern society highly depends on internet for various tasks from business communication to even ordering our lunch. On the other hand, public transportation system is prerequisite of day-to-day life, since we all have to leave our neighborhood at certain point. That said, I believe improvement of public transportation is more beneficial to our society.
To begin with, what does internet do for us? In the modern life, business are often conducted with online e-mails, online orderings, and so on. Students are also depend heavily on internet, we use internet to search for answers, to google for materials for studying, to review documents just like old fashion library does. However, despite all these useful works, how often did we simply surfing online, and looking at hilarious clips and updating friends' recent activities? I believe the answer is most of the time. The serious tasks mention above can be supplant by phone or even physical interaction, while other leisures can be replace by real activities such as playing basketball with friend or chatting with family members in a cafe.
The internet is truly dispensable.
As for public transportation system, this is what we actually requires. Public transportation, for business man, give us a better access to engage a potential client, and for students, it gives us higher efficiency to commuting between school and home, which increases our time to study. Over all, better public transportation increases productivity as a whole society. That's consider a lame system in a old, poorly developed city. Such lame system devour considerable time in our everyday life. Most of our time is in a traffic jam. This definitely does not help us.
Another advantage is that better public transportation may encourage us to start leaving our home and increasing outdoor activities during weekend. One of the reason in Taiwan that most college student choose to stay home a live as a coach potato is because the traffic is always terrifying. The great speed of our internet is even exacerbating this phenomenon. If we have a better public transportation system, we can go mountain climbing in suburban area, real surfing in nearest , and so on
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...ent should be carefully arranged. Among these development, internet access and public transportat...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...orderings, and so on. Students are also depend heavily on internet, we use internet to...
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Line 11, column 63, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...tation system, this is what we actually requires. Public transportation, for business ma...
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Line 11, column 371, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...reases productivity as a whole society. Thats consider a lame system in a old, poorly...
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Line 11, column 403, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ociety. Thats consider a lame system in a old, poorly developed city. Such lame s...
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Line 15, column 482, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n suburban area, real surfing in nearest , and so on
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, may, so, while, as for, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29427083333 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00014729497 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591145833333 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6299460176 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3913043478 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6956521739 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178172057341 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529138497025 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506924401394 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954380438216 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301064557864 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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