The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where releva

The diagram illustrates how cement are being produced and the procedure of making concrete.
Overall, limestone and clay are needed for producing cement with a critical and long procedure, in contrast, the production of concrete required mixture of four ingredients including cement.

In the first stage, limestone and clay are put into a crusher to turn those in form of powder. Afterwards, the powder is then combined in a mixture before passing into rotating crusher heater in which the heat is given form outside of the the tube. The resulting mixture fall into a grinter following which final product cement produced. Lastly, the cement packed into bags.

Regarding the second diagram, the consists of mainly gravel, which is small stones, have half contribution of total mixture. The other materials used are send a quarter, and water 10%. These all are pured into a concrete mixture which continually rotates to combine all ingredients and make final product concrete.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'needed for'.
Suggestion: needed for
...crete. Overall, limestone and clay are needed for needed for producing cement with critical and long...
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Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...which the heat is given form outside of the the tube. The resulting mixture fall into a...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 236, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...which the heat is given form outside of the the tube. The resulting mixture fall into a...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 155, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sent'.
Suggestion: sent
...l mixture. The other materials used are send a quarter, and water 10%. These all are...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, lastly, regarding, second, then, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27848101266 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58119237522 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5150977747 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203079078196 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862066095629 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746403370409 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146140710497 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765057830263 0.0819641961636 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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