In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their ageing members.
Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Aging population constitute to 35 percent of the world's population and the life expectancy rate is gradually raising to 75 with technological and medical advances. These changes are prompting for increased number of retirement facilities and proportionately increasing elders being left to live at these centres. I strongly condemn the notion of retirees living in rest homes and agree that families are responsible for their care at final phases of life.
One cannot deny that parents and grandparents played a pivotal role in shaping our lives. They provided the much-needed educational and medical care while we were growing up as children to adulthood. Would we be in the social status what we are in now or would we be having the benefits that we are enjoying now without them? Absolutely not. This is the time we payback for their deeds and sacrifices. Abandoning them at rest houses is one of the cruel things what an individual can impose to pensioners.
However for serveral reasons, many people place elders in rest homes. Either due to busy and gruelling work schedules or small places to live or due to financial burden old people are sent to old folks' home. But if we can look at the brighter side of elders living with family, they form the basis of the strong bond among the family members. In the current era, most of the families have working parents which leaves the adolescents unattended. This could lead youngsters stray away their path and easily be vulnerable to harmful, toxic and bullying influences in the society. If children are under golden-agers supervision at home, they cultivate good behaviour and inculcate decent habits which eventually leads to successful and respectful future. Children also learn the importance of family ties, love and compassion with this sort of upbringing. So, elders spending with families is crucial for benefitting society and not at old age homes.
Therefore, old people should unconditionally be loved by the families and should not be placed old age homes not just as a token of gratitude to the life or society they gifted us and our offsprings but also they truly deserve the love and affection.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ividual can impose to pensioners. However for serveral reasons, many people place...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04155124654 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75696060767 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581717451524 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2448217495 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.058823529 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232921502126 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715754900782 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659116718986 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130236640299 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712626089754 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.