Some section of the society feels that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that older people should be encouraged to live independently.
Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate and reach your own conclusion.
The significance of staying together in the ever pacing world is an enduring debate. While some hold the opinion that grandparents live with their offspring, some assert on independent living. I however, feel that elders should be living with their children's’ families.
People supporting the view of grandparents living together with their young say that this type of lifestyle is beneficial for both the generations, including the younger. In environments of these families, grandparents could disseminate their knowledge and life time experiences to their young ones. This helps the grand children to develop the cognitive skills, interpersonal skills, and social behavior. Also, in families where both the parents are working, children do not feel isolated when grandparents foster them. This also develops value of strong family connection in the present generation. In a country like India, where much prominence is given to families and bond, this practice enhances the ethics and personal traits.
However, a certain section of people who are at loggerheads with the former assert that there is a need to make grandparents live independently. They argue that older generation who are not acquainted with the hustle and bustle of the city may be stifled by the current generation. Older people are healthier when they reside in serene and calm environments such as on the countryside in comparison with the lives between resonating noises of vehicles and overcrowded apartments in the urban areas. A research conducted by the students at the University of Cambridge on city dwelling of senior citizens with children and their offspring verses independent living on countryside had clear discrepancies in numbers. 97 percent of old populace chose to live independently citing freedom of expression and conventional lifestyle as major reasons.
In conclusion, though there are differences in opinion of suitable environments for grandparents along with supportive reasons for their respective views, I believe that grandparents staying with their offspring is better for the mutual benefit of both generations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...s could disseminate their knowledge and life time experiences to their young ones. This h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58024691358 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0904849771 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5917610785 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372419268643 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117050604929 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882938710922 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215876433526 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808595764697 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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