You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company. In your letter, you should tell:
– Why you ride a bicycle to work
– What the problem is with the parking
– What your suggestions are.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to bring to your notice about the parking problems of my cycle. My name is John Gresham and I work for KPMG at 2nd floor of the Paramount building.
My residence is 5 Kms away from work and it takes almost an hour for commute through my car which is why I have opted to ride. It is just 20 mins ride to office. This is allowing me to stay healthy and contribute to environment.
However, the parking facilities for cyclists at the establishment are inferior. The space is not enough for more than 10 cycles and always full which is a deterrent to several others who have shown interest to cycle to work. Also, the current designated slot at the 5th basement has insufficient lighting. Hence, I request you to allocate adequate space and light in the parking lot and expect these improvements be implemented at the earliest. You can keep me informed on my email if the management has alternative plans.
Yours Faithfully,
John Gresham
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... My name is John Gresham and I work for KPMG at 2nd floor of the Paramount build...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66473988439 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69330668488 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676300578035 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5509179712 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3636363636 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194344880225 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644190183671 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451217596601 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117141653846 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225467434262 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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