Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Celebrities often deal with both issues and benefits associated with their stardom. In my opinion, heightened attention for famous personalities is a boon than a bane because of the special stature in the society and subsidies they obtain from this.
Stars are always treated distinguished in every nook and cranny of the world. This is because of the excellence they have exhibited in a particular field and as a result, they earn love and respect from commoners which are usually difficult to attain. This allows celebrities to often gain access to resources that are prohibited for common public. For instance, most of the succesful sportsmen are allocated lands by the state bodies to set up a sports centre which is obviously an advantage to the celebrities. However, privacy invasion is a common concern that famous individuals face.
Another advantage that often film stars and athletics reap is the subsidised prices they are offered in all areas. Reservation systems are in place right from education to jobs mostly in all nations for men and women involved in sports and other forms of art. They are also provided with discounted rental allowance and ration for living. In India, government bears educational and medical expenses for district, state and national level champions. The only facet they have to combat is public and media attention and it is negligible over benefits they gain from the status.
In conclusion, even though the famous in the field of arts and sports have to tackle with unwanted focus on their private lives, they have more advantage with resources and facilities they gain from their successful career.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1375464684 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65674184835 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1230125523 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990932697833 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358226721265 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287046530754 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662408770113 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217245049112 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.