Although some people believe that it is important to keep old friends than making new friends, in another group of people’s perspective making new friends is as important as keeping old friends. I am inclined to be not fully agreed or disagreed with that statement.
In some people’s points of views, old friends are important to keep them. In my thought also old friends are very important. If someone is our old friend it means that they are with us for a long time and as you know if they were not good people we could not be with them for a long time. In other words, it is important to care them because making friends depends on the chance and we should appreciate this chance and try not to lose them. Personally I have friends who are very close to me and we are on the same side in lots of thoughts and I really enjoy spending time, talking, and chatting with them. I am very comfortable with these people and I do not want to lose anyone of them.
In spite of the facts that I mentioned above making new friends is as important as keeping old friends. Firstly, everybody knows that humankind has a social personality and he should make a relationship with other people. The best relationship is friendship due to the fact that we can talk to them confidently and freely. As a result, we should make more and more friends have this opportunity a lot in our lives. Secondly, everybody has his own thoughts and making a friend a lot means we can realize more thoughts and views. For instance, I really enjoy it when I talk with someone who is unfamiliar to me and look up his personality.
To conclude, I do not completely agree or disagree with that statement. Keeping old friends is important but making new friends is important too. We should take care of our relations, friends and never forget to have new friends because we have to be updated in society in all aspects.
Although some people believe that it is important to keep old friends than making new friends, in another group of people’s perspective making new friends is as important as keeping old friends. I am inclined to be not fully agreed or disagreed with that statement.
In some people’s points of views, old friends are important to keep them. In my thought also old friends are very important. If someone is our old friend it means that they are with us for a long time and as you know if they were not good people we could not be with them for a long time. In other words, it is important to care them because making friends depends on the chance and we should appreciate this chance and try not to lose them. Personally I have friends who are very close to me and we are on the same side in lots of thoughts and I really enjoy spending time, talking, and chatting with them. I am very comfortable with these people and I do not want to lose anyone of them.
In spite of the facts that I mentioned above making new friends is as important as keeping old friends. Firstly, everybody knows that humankind has a social personality and he should make a relationship with other people. The best relationship is friendship due to the fact that we can talk to them confidently and freely. As a result, we should make more and more friends have this opportunity a lot in our lives. Secondly, everybody has his own thoughts and making a friend a lot means we can realize more thoughts and views. For instance, I really enjoy it when I talk with someone who is unfamiliar to me and look up his personality.
To conclude, I do not completely agree or disagree with that statement. Keeping old friends is important but making new friends is important too. We should take care of our relations, friends and never forget to have new friends because we have to be updated in society in all aspects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, you know, as a result, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53043478261 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61106172892 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43768115942 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7628784822 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.546796975679 0.236089414692 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199220390744 0.076458572812 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.21701117261 0.0737576698707 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.446842072236 0.150856017488 296% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.300230578606 0.0645574589148 465% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.5 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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