When a new technological device becomes available. Some people buy it right away, while others will wait until many have acquired it. Which do you prefer?
Technological devices have always been updating for the last decades, and now these devices are constantly changing at a remarkably fast pace. Some people desirously tend to catch up with the latest electronic devices while others prefer to conservatively use not very new ones. Although benefiting from the newest options seem very tempting, I would rather stick to those adopted by the crowd. In what follows I will elaborate on my perspective.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that new arrival e-products usually are astronomically expensive and their prices get more reasonable after a while. This pricing is not necessarily related to their capability and mostly is a result of the trend. Neither sellers nor people obsessed with new gadgets notice the fact that many new arrival products share common features with the old ones. I, however always evaluate new devices’ options and performances first and rarely get convinced to buy them as fast as they get introduced to and distributed in the market. For instance, once I appraised a new smartphone with the previous model of the same brand, and I found it pointless to buy the latest. As a result, I saved roughly one-third of the whole price of the expensive one, and consequently, I could afford to buy a suitable gear for my phone which was an smartwatch.
Furthermore, by not using the latest technological device, you can involuntarily carry out an evaluation in which you assess users’ satisfaction of having that special device. Sometimes, some different models of the same products arrive, and I feel I am facing a dilemma of buying the one suiting me the most. In this situation, I do nothing but giving myself plenty of time to ask their consumers whether they are satisfied. My mom once ordered one of the newest wireless headphones from a very well-known brand, but, surprisingly it did not work properly, and it was announced that it would be discontinued.
Finally, dealing with a new operating system or devices’ software and applications has always been challenging, and it takes much time and a lot of effort to get used to it. I can distinctly remember when I bought a very new smartphone with cutting-edge technology immediately after it arrived. In spite of its appealing appearance having a curved edge, I barely could manage to use every offered options while I had just got accustomed to working with the previous one.
In short, all aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that owing to high price of new arrival devices, unreliability of their productivity and their techy operating systems, newly-spread products do not seem superior to the previous ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 873, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, third, well, while, for instance, i feel, in short, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 443.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08803611738 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0245392535 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573363431151 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5495019358 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.222222222 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6111111111 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224802377276 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629776848873 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047717824051 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11484653734 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478843484743 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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