Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
there is no denying that giant corporations and industries have radically changed the way we live. it is often thought that these organizations should move from urbanized cities to rural regions. although there are some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more benefits.
Indeed, there are few limitations when industries are relocated to rural regions. Firstly, these regions lack infrastructures such as water supply, electricity, and internet connection that are essential for leading the business. Secondly, it is quite challenging for large firms to find skilled laborers locally. As a result, they suffer from decreased productivity, inferior products, and sub-optimal profits. However, these problems can be solved with proper planning.
Nonetheless, suburbanization of the rural sectors has significant positive aspects. To begin with, companies can cut down on their carbon footprint in the cities. the carbon dioxide released from them eventually pollutes the already polluted local atmosphere. therefore, moving the factories to rural areas would decrease the pollution level in the cities. Another positive aspect is that rural sectors generally have lower wages, property taxes, and land prices, making these sectors relatively attractive to manufacturing firms. For instance, the 2019 annual report generated by rural industries Association has declared an annual saving of over two million Indian Rupees because of the factories relocating to the outskirts. Additionally, shifting businesses to the countryside will contribute to higher income levels, lower poverty, and unemployment levels, therefore, boosting the local economy.
To sum up, although establishing industrial businesses in rural areas, create some manageable hurdles, these drawbacks are overshadowed by the significant savings and reduced environmental impact.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07547169811 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03415938532 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675471698113 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3885102673 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.625 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126331017228 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387888030872 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339304344543 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748009348288 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256300296085 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.69 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.63 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.