Big Salary is much important then job satisfaction.
Agree or disagree?
There is no doubt having a job is crucial. Although many believe that a fat paycheck is essential for a better living, I think job satisfaction is equally necessary. My inclination is justified in the ensuing paragraphs
Firstly, even if an employee withdraws a high salary every month, but feels pressurized and miserable, then such employees will not accomplish their work perfectly. While pursuing one's interest will always bring pleasure and a feeling of content and happiness, which will result in better performance at the workplace and keep them motivated. Recent research by the Top 500 fortune companies, shows that people who work in their interested careers are happier and satisfied. While those who chose a job with a high remuneration to lose interest in their job in the long run.
To prove my point further, if employees are pleased with their work, they are more likely to try harder to achieve their goals and that would, in turn, help them climb up the corporate ladder and be rewarded with higher remuneration. Many different studies and articles show that employee satisfaction is one of the strongest predictors of long-term positive company performance. High job satisfaction is also linked to performance, which in turn is linked to higher profits.
To conclude, Although Receiving a fat paycheck can allow one to enjoy a lavish lifestyle such as owning a big house or to provide their children with extravagant toys, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more crucial to lead a happy and motivated life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...sh their work perfectly. While pursuing ones interest will always bring pleasure and...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sted careers are happier and satisfied. While those who chose a job with a high remun...
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Message: Use simply 'Many'.
Suggestion: Many
...d be rewarded with higher remuneration. Many different studies and articles show that employee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, i think, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10276679842 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86675457689 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6936069949 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.1 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143543571597 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594474959322 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422015998959 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877750327529 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190725980506 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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