The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates how many employees and factories were there in England and Wales between 1861 and 1901.
Overall, it is noticeable that while the number of workers, include both sexes, decreased significantly after 40 years, it of factories rose nearly 3 times as many as it used to in the initial year despite the fact that the quantity of working places declined since 1881. Furthermore, although the number of male employees were doubled compared to it of female employees in 1861, in 1901, the ratio between male and female in working places was nearly 1:1.
As can be seen obviously, the total workers in factories in 1901 were about 7 times fewer than those were in 1861, 61000 compared to 477100. For most of the year, the number of male working staffs, which contributed the majority of the total, were higher than it of female working, except in 1861, when the situation reversed. In this year, female employees were 160000 opposed to 131780 of male ones.
Conversely, the number of factories being built increased triple in the 40 years. At first, there were 225 working places for employees, and after opening 2 more companies 10 years later, the quantity of factories were at a peak at 622 places in 1971 and 721 in 10 more years. There was a decline later in the number of factories since it was just 600 places after closing more than 100 companies in the previous of 20 years.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, while, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71836734694 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43950548378 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50612244898 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.817986667 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.444444444 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119266052028 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653508333527 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500264282295 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987611535555 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548310668277 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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