Some people believe that if a police force carries guns this encourages higher level of violence in that society To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that when police are fully prepared with guns, they are more likely to increase the level of violence in the society. However, in my opinion, I partly agree with this point of view for several reasons.
First, it is dangerous for innocent people when the police use guns. Guns are created to shot an individual in a far distance. As a result, in some circumstances, police officers could use guns as a weapon to stop the criminals’ actions such as running or threatening the hostage. However, if they cannot use it properly, they could harm the innocent people or shot the one who doesn’t have any crime records. In particular, one US police shot an unarmed man named Jacob Blake, which then later created a critical flow in the society.
However, not a crimes in the community are related to the gun relations for the police officers. There are many cases causing violence which the residents were killed by dangerous offenders, or in a fight with someone without the presence of police officers. On the other hand, guns used by the police would decrease the rate of being threatened when they are on duty by the criminals and limit the chance of harming more innocent people of the offenders.
In conclusion, I don’t think using guns could cause all violance to the community. However, the police should be careful not to injure innocent people when they are in their mission; and the government should have more gun obligations to prevent the overuse of guns of the police officers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a crime' or simply 'crimes'?
Suggestion: a crime; crimes
...ical flow in the society. However, not a crimes in the community are related to the gun...
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Line 4, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...overuse of guns of the police officers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54861568978 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536398467433 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5295604965 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175920568765 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693502393384 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290209130495 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11576207584 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00837397849802 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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