Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, this encourages higher level of violence in that society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In this day and age, a lot of violators are more and more increasing, which leads many negative effects to public. some people argue that if guns are carried by a police, this supports higher level of criminal in that society. I completely disagree with this argument for some reasons below.
First of all, I think police should be allowed to use guns all the situations, which will decrease offenders. if people become police, they will have enough knowledge about laws which mention situations where they can use guns. they will know which cases forcing them to use weapons. it is believed that many unexpected cases such as terrorism occur so the police have guns to fight in those bloody battles. On top of that, many countries have promulgated a law that dwellers are allowed to use guns, so the police have to carry guns to protect themselves. it is estimated that over 70% residents in Thailand have guns in their home so every police always carry guns by their sides.
Last but not least, the level of criminal in a country will go up because armed violators who are escaping and posing more threat to the society. it makes the police force bring guns to shoot offenders in self - defense.
To put it in a nut shell, I think the police should be allowed to carry guns, which decreases the level of violence in the city.
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but, first, if, so, well, i think, such as, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61181434599 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33751319571 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561181434599 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.703827658 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0833333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257425502425 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101574325393 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820072952967 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156670002763 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844765615881 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.