Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, due to the strict competition that the companies imply, it is somehow impossible to find a suitable job opportunity that meets almost all your desires. By the way, a vast number of people believe that attending a career in which workers are required to manipulate multiple tasks results in higher rates of satisfaction, while others are of the opinion that asking people to handle many tasks simultaneously results in confusion and low efficiency. I personally go with the former opinion and the reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
First of all, it is really hard to focus on a single topic for about 8 hours per day. Undoubtedly, working on similar tasks all day long will be boring and mundane for people and hence, it is natural to lose great levels of effectiveness and creativity. My personal experience is a compelling example of this point. A few years ago, I was working as a content manager at a chocolate company and what I was supposed to do was to enter details of products in an Excel sheet. Actually, I had to do this same task for days and after a short period of time, I felt like I am just a robot and this made me anxious. So, since I was trying hard to focus on entering the data correctly and felt a lot of pressure, I made enormous mistakes and didn't work properly. So, I deem it to be really hard to emphasize on a single task for a long time and expect to have no mistakes.
Secondly, it is obvious that working on a variety of tasks at the same time and trying to manage them in the best way possible improves the employees' creativity and brings them more advantages. For instance, I remember that my sister worked in a graphic design company and she had to design different visual elements for numerous websites, create logos and banners, and also make short animated videos to promote services and products. During those years, not only she learned so many topics about her field of study, but also she experienced high levels of excitement and passion because she was able to do various things and this even helped her to feel more confident.
Finally, yet importantly, working on multiple tasks results in more working opportunities. Actually, today, if you want to become an employee of a popular company, you will be asked to know about different aspects of the job. So, having the opportunity to work on different things at work, provides you better chances of getting hired by brands and well-known agencies and results in a promise of a more abundant life.
In a nutshell, In my humble opinion, being able to manage multiple tasks during work hours prevents feeling unproductive and board and additionally, helps you developed more professional skills and get more experiences on a specific subject.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 458, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... do was to enter details of products in an Excel sheet. Actually, I had to do this same ...
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Line 2, column 538, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...is same task for days and after a short period of time, I felt like I am just a robot and this...
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Line 2, column 735, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... pressure, I made enormous mistakes and didnt work properly. So, I deem it to be real...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...m in the best way possible improves the employees creativity and brings them more advanta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for instance, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2296.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 484.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74380165289 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75665985456 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547520661157 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0990391024 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.058823529 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4705882353 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18846945083 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576847165263 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345937744945 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989318403968 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231559518896 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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