You recently bought an oven for your kitchen but it does not work You called up the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager In your letter describe the problem with the oven explain what happened when you called up the shop State w

Essay topics:

You recently bought an oven for your kitchen but it does not work. You called up the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:
describe the problem with the oven
explain what happened when you called up the shop
State what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about a product I have puchased from your store 2 weeks ago, I also want you to know how disappointed I am with your customer service team.

On november 3rd I have got the oven delivered to my home and after seting it up in my kitchen we have found that knob which does all the temparature set-up for the oven was missing. We tried to test it with out it and figured out that there was no consistent temparature geting set.

So, two days later I have ranged up the shop regarding the missing knob and I was transfered to your customer service department they said it will be resolved in 48 hours. But it's been 10 days since then I have not recived a single reply or acknowledgement from your team regarding the complaint.

I just want my missing knob or please replace my oven as soon as possible, for the refrence, this is my complaint number-6432 and my full name is Saketh Sai.

I would really appreciate your quick response in this matter and look forward to hearing from you.

Your's Sincerely,
Sekar.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...e oven was missing. We tried to test it with out it and figured out that there was no co...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, really, regarding, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57303061039 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641025641026 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.938053421 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.625 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 16.8248392259 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233788603136 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914727445414 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447119599819 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109356248135 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432174967632 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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