You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night.
Write a letter to the Chairman of the Housing Society. In your letter:
Explain what will be happening
Offer your apologies in advance
Invite him to join the celebration
I am writing this letter to inform you about a small get together in our backyard this weekend.
As my nephew is graduating law school this this week we are throwing a party on his achivement with our close family and friends on saturday evening which might continue until midnight.
I would like to apologise in advance for the incovience we might cause to the neghiborhood. There are 4 families and 7 friends of my nephew who will be gracing the party with total guest list of 25. we would like to reserve street parking for extra cars I hope that will be not a problem.
We also extend our invitation for you to join the party it starts around 6pm with a small cake cutting followed by dinner and drinks.
Please let me know if you have any concerns regarding this arrangement, I would like to hear your suggestions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Dear David, I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
... As my nephew is graduating law school this this week we are throwing a party on his ach...
Line 6, column 200, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
... the party with total guest list of 25. we would like to reserve street parking fo...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70512820513 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52791775555 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3668642388 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190556257849 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770562171281 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369961339337 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944332782699 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228544291509 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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