Globalization and technology is making existence of traditional shops in urban and rural areas obsolete. It's irrefutable, growth in e-commerce opening doors for new marketing strategies in a way driving away actual shops from business. However, I would not go far enough to say that this will lead to closing down grocery outlets at all places. With all due respect, I beg to differ with the statement, and would like to cast light on the issue while asserting my opinion with relevant examples.
Exponential increase in online purchasing, like never before, is truly frightening as all our products are just one click away. Whereas, its' factually incorrect if one say that we get same fun by buying goods on internet just like taking from a shop next to our house. According to Indian Chamber of Commerce, guiding body for trading, people in small towns and villages are still reluctant to use mobile applications for buying or hiring service. Main reason behind this is, personal relations developed between merchant and consumer, is out of context in virtual world. Moreover, when it comes to quality check and deficiency services, complaining is easy for costumer as he can meet in person the shop owner. Similarly, when looking for range of goods and products, it's very convenient for potential client to get first hand knowledge before purchasing. For instance, electrical equipment's are needed to see for warranty and model in detail as a small picture in a website might miss some important information that we should be aware of.
There is a pre-conceived notion that procuring an item from a software application, which works on algorithms, is sign of sophisticated life style. Although, research carried by International consumer forum, revealed altogether different picture. Youngsters, who make use of technology at optimum level, show interest in online shopping for only reason of being lazy. Infact, according to same survey, nearly 60% adults and 32% of teenagers when they give feedback about their experience they had little fun in doing screen shopping. On the other hand, no return policy maintained by digital merchandise is often confusing to regular buyers. For instance, Amazon online retailer, will mandate it's users to return goods within 10 days from purchasing date if they are not satisfied. Apart , their clandestine terms and regulation will not cover damages caused while transit. Likewise prices of equipment's , especially electric goods ,are relatively higher as they are inclusive of shipping them.
In a nutshell, even though there is huge disparity when we compare online to conventional shopping, customer satisfaction is ultimate important for any industry. That being said, atleast not in immediate future, cash and carry franchises will not run out of business as long as they carry their warm and welcoming service for which a consumer always look forward. Nevertheless, age of transformation also require fast and reliable modes which is filled by wired operations. Therefore both transactions have their special places to serve needs of their respective clients.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, likewise, look, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2620.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 495.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29292929293 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84140107565 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 327.0 176.041082164 186% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 814.5 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.029936963 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.913043478 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5217391304 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78260869565 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164146713809 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395265552331 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422608520712 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926838154372 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488446042618 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 78.4519038076 210% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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